Image from Jess (Collins)--one of my favorite artists.
You will be graded on the depth and originality (not said before you in the comment stream) of your response to the following:
- Begin with what you saw as a strength in the essay--what was good?
- Show where the essay could have been improved.
- End with how the essay enhanced or changed your perception or thinking on any topic--(I know this is vague--run with it).
Your responses should be as specific as possible--cut and paste the words from the essay if you need to. You can comment on anything from the analysis to how the evidence is integrated to sentence style and structure to typos to diction to philosophical elaboration to anything that writers must consider that I have left out. Remember to carefully phrase your responses in a way that you would want to receive (because you will be here soon.)
Peace. (And keep it unfeigned.)