Wednesday, January 20, 2010
Student work on page 249 of A HUMUMENT by Tom Phillips
For Hillary’s essay:
I only included the 2nd and 3rd paragraphs for Hillary’s essay on page 249 of A Humument by Tom Phillips. I thought these two paragraphs were particularly well done in terms of offering analysis for specific moments in the piece.
1. Based on what you are reading in her essay (and what you see in the image, write the introduction to this essay for Hillary.)
2. Then explain what you would focus on to end the essay. (You don’t have to write the essay, just informally write what you would focus on to end the essay—a couple more body paragraphs and a conclusion.)
The 2nd and 3rd Paragraphs for Hillary Du's Essay on Page 249 of Phillip's a Humument
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